常有小伙伴和小编吐槽：雅思小作文，尤其是带图的那种，可怕指数简直max...
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一瞄到图，就生出了一种可怕的既视感...
按照惯例，小编还是分析几条***重要的小贴士。
小编tips
- 涵盖图中所有重要信息点。
- 对整体情况有清晰把握。
- 有恰当的对比。
4. 对信息进行有规律性的描述。
那么，怎么样才可以做到这几点呢？小编结合上面这个图来讲。
光看图，是远远不够的。
在这张图上面，有很重要的文字说明性内容，小伙伴们一定要有耐心，逐字逐句看完。
题目
题目中说：The map below show the centre of a ***all town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparis*** where relevant.
由此我们可以知道，下面两幅图的***，是这个小镇现状和规范的对比。
而需要做的，是选择信息，描述***，做相关比较。
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我们来看一看剑12给出的7分范文。
The two maps of the centre of the towns of Islip give information about the city currently and in the future.
***句，永远要讲本篇文章是关于什么的，其实，也就是换一种表达方式，重复题目（一定不能原封不动抄一遍题目）；那么怎么转换？可以转换近义词、换语法方式、换表达方式，还记得君姐讲阅读时，给你们总结的规律吗？雅思阅读***详解(三): 那些似是而非的题, 怎么破?
Overall, a lot of modificati*** can be observed during the forecast development.
接下来，就要具体说图中的重要信息。
First of all, according to the current map the centre is close to a coutryside. A main road deserves houses, a school, several shops and a park.
这篇范文的做法，是敏锐观察到，现图中城中心靠近郊区。
Looking more closely at the map predicting the future development of the city, a lot of modificati*** can be observed.
再进一步阐释，先用一句总起，a lot of modificati*** can be observed.
然后，从中心城区的面积，道路变化，设施变化等一一枚举；并且注意变换语法结构，保持用词用语的准确。
The size of the centre will increase in an oval shape; therefore the countryside will disappear. Moreover, the single road will be replaced by a bigger dual carriageway. A pedestrian way will deserve the central area.New houses will be built with new facilities such as a bus station and a parking. The shops will be grouped in a shopping mall. The next point is the garden area which will be ***aller. As the city will h***e more people the school will be bigger.
***后，这篇7分范文还有一个收尾部分。
To sum up ,between the actual map of Islip town centre and the future planned development, a lot of modificati*** are predicted. On the one hand the city will be bigger with more facilities. On the other hand the park will be reduced and the countryside will disappear.
其实小编认为，这个收尾的对比部分，和前一部分的区分度，还不够鲜明；而且，文中对于“deserves”的选择使用，也不大对头；否则分数可以更高。
但，作为7分范文，这篇文还是很可圈可点的，从逻辑结构上来说，一连串currently, first of all, therefore,moreover,the next point等等，各位烤鸭们可以直接借鉴。
还有一些所谓的“大词”，比如改变大多会用change，而范文中用了modification；再比如，the shops will be grouped in a shopping mall，这个句子写得简洁又地道，很值得参考。
不过小烤鸭们一定不要盲目追求“大词”、空背范文；而要摸清楚写作的思路，做有针对性的练习。
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