西安寒假雅思写作，西安雅思寒***对一写作 雅思写作长难句
西安寒假雅思写作，西安雅思寒***对一写作提分，雅思长难句该怎么写成。雅思写作是让很多学生头疼的地方，想要提高雅思分数并不是一件容易的事情，需要考生付出很多努力。那么今天西安思润雅思中心的老师手把手教你仅仅7步，写出雅思写作漂亮的长难句。
首先，我们需要一句短句：
大家一般都能写出一个非常简单、只有主谓结构的短句：
Japanese Tourists + tr***el abroad = Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad.
如果要描述成一个数据，就可以加上the amount, the number, the percentage, the rate等等等等~
例如：The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased.
第二步，在简单句的基础上，添加相关的数据。
即：The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased from 5 million to 15 million.
第三步，也很简单，只要在之前的基础上，加上这个数据的相应时间 (if applicable)：
The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased from 5 millionto 15 millionbetween 1985 and 1995.
第四步：之前给出的数据，是正正好好的？是EXACTLY的吗？如果不是的话，我们就来稍稍描述一下：
The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased from just under 5 million toaround 15 million between 1985 and1995.
第五步：适当的添加一个副词 Addan adverb
The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased dramatically from just under 5million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995.
第六步：以名词结构来复述一遍
(这里请仔细看)：
The number of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad increased dramaticallyfrom just under 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10 million in 10 years.
第七步：尝试换个方式来写这句句子：
改写成：
There was a dramatic increase in thenumber of Japanese tourists who tr***elled abroad from justunder 5 million to around 15 million between 1985 and 1995, a rise of about 10million in 10 years.
大家在平时练习的时候可以试着写出一些长难句，有错误了及时更正，在考场上要写出一些长句子来增加自己文章的可读性，同时切记不可用力过猛，要根据时间情况来决定。
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